#5
29th Sep 2007 at 03:13 AM
Hi JulieJ,
That was pretty good.
I only saw a few mistakes, but other then that..
just keep making them, and you'll be a pro in no time.
I'm so proud of you girl!
Come to the orchard in the spring. There will light and wine and sweethearts in the pomegranate flowers.
If you do not come, these do not matter. If you come, these do not matter. ~Rummi